Sunday, September 26, 2010

Week 4 - September 23, 2010

Peer review of Paper 2

Discussion of Chapter 6 “Planning and Organizing Your Essay”
Paper 3  Brainstorming
Writing a cover letter
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Three: Process Analysis

A process essay describes how something is done or how something works. Choose a topic that is familiar and write an essay identifying the process or procedure. Give an overview of the process, if needed. Details should be arranged in the order in which they occur. Give examples or make comparisons if needed.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words.

Assignment for September 30, 2010

1. Reading
a. Dancing with the Tiger (DWTT) p11 How to Write a Letter by G. Keillor
b. Expressways: Section VIIC “Avoiding Sentence Errors p 560

2. Paper 2-4 – Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Professor Barnes’ comments, peer review comments, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 3-2 – Research your process and bring a class a Idea Map of your technology

4. Word maps

5. MyWritingLab.com

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Week 3 - September 16, 2010

Entry Diagnostic


Peer review of Paper 1

Discussion of Chapter 6 “Planning and Organizing Your Essay”

MLA Review

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Assignment for September 23, 2010

1. Reading

a. Expressways: Chapters 5 “Strategies for Revising”; Chapter 7, Drafting and Revising Essays, and Chapter 9 “Description”

2. Paper 1-4 – Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Professor Barnes’ comments, peer review comments, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 2-3 – Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, September 21, 2010. Bring in one copy of the rough draft for peer review.

4. Word maps

5. MyWritingLab.com

Monday, September 13, 2010

Paper 2 Brainstorm

birth control
cell phone
computer
marijuana
x
e pill
cd
8 track
tv
vinyl records
car
hair weave
pen
pencilpaper
video camera
microphone
laptop

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Example of Paper 2 Description

Rubbers. Jimmies. Raincoats. Trojan. Lifestyle. Durex. The condom was known by many names. For the last three hundred years, the condom has helped prevent pregnancy and prevent the spread of sexually transmitted diseases, including AIDS. But now we must say goodbye – goodbye to this guardian of health and yes to an increase in unwanted pregnancies. Yes, to syphilis, chlamydia, herpes, and gonorrhea. Yes, to the steady climbing numbers of new AIDS case each year. But it is not like the condom didn’t try. The latex sheath worn on the penis during sexual intercourse acted as a barrier against the unknown – protecting all parties involved. Handled gently and not stored in back pockets, wallets, or anywhere that could possibly lead to damage, the condom was a shield. The condom was inexpensive and readily available. Because of its lightweight structure a man could enjoy sex longer, which also provided the couple with a safe, enjoyable, and undistracted sexual experience. Available in a variety colors, sizes, textures, lubricated and non-lubricated the condom begged for mass appeal. Attempting to diversify even more the condom offered a female version to help women take charge of their own sexual health.


Due to ignorance, embarrassment, lack of communication between parents and teens or just simple irresponsibility, the condom waited in vain for people to stop resisting it’s presence. But the resistance got stronger and the condom was left to die. The condom leaves children without families, a Nation plagued by STDs, and a world ravaged with AIDS.

Week 2 - September 9, 2010

Submit Paper 1-2

Register for MyWritingLab

Review of the Parts of Speech

Explanation of Paper Two

Paper 2-1: Brainstorming

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Two: Description

Describe a piece of technology by writing its eulogy. Technology is any device used for any process. Your description should include a clear purpose and intended audience. The technology you describe may still exist but compose the essay as if it is not. This is a eulogy so be sure to explain what the piece of technology was in “life” and what legacy it left behind.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words.

Assignments for September 16, 2010

1. Reading:

a. Expressways: Chapters 3 “Writing Topic Sentences,” and 4 “Developing and Arranging Details,” Chapter 6 “Narration”

b. Part A Understanding the Parts of Speech pg 472-490

2. Paper 1-3 - Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, September 14, 2010. Bring in one copy of the rough draft for peer review.

3. Paper 2-2 – Bring in an Idea map of the topic

4. Complete entry Diagnostic for MyWritingLab.com. Complete “Getting Started” modules (3).

5. Word maps

6. Bring a blue book to class

Paper 1 - Brainstorm

first crush
first day of school
first recital
learning to ride a bike
first piano lesson
first time getting a manicure
first pair of heels
Disney World
Prom
first concert
first dentist appt
paycheck
first car
first dance
first kiss
first time driving
skates

Thursday, September 2, 2010

Week 1 - September 2, 2010

Introduction


Review of Syllabus

Scoring Guide for English Composition

Review Handouts

o Word Maps

o Idea Maps

o Five paragraph Essay Format

o Things to avoid

o Words that are often misused or spelled incorrectly

Writing Process

Explanation of Paper One

Paper 1-1: Brainstorming

Explanation of next week’s assignment



Paper one: Narrative

Tell a story about a vivid childhood memory. Your narrative should describe the events of the story using a time sequence. Remember to keep the point of view consistent throughout the essay. Use the same tense throughout and focus on the most important elements of the story. Using vivid language will help your readers better visualize your story.



The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words.



Assignments for September 9, 2010



1. Purchase supplies and required texts.



2. Reading:

a. Expressways: Introduction, Chapters 1"The Writing Process” and Chapter 2, “The Reading Process”

b. Handouts



3. Paper 1-2 – Bring in an Idea map of the topic



4. Word maps