Monday, November 29, 2010

Week 14 - December 2, 2010

Review Word Maps

Individual Portfolio Preparation conferences
Explanation of next week’s assignment

FINAL PORTFOLIO

Outside cover
Name
Date
English 101-104
Ms. Barnes

Inside – Left
Bluebook Diagnostic
Draft of cover letter
Draft of paper from Section A
Draft of paper from Section B

Inside - Right
Final Draft of Cover Letter
Final Draft of Paper from Section A
Final Draft of Paper from Section B
MyWritingLab printout

Assignment for December 9, 2010 – LAST DAY OF CLASS

1. Final Portfolio due in class by 6 pm. Late portfolios will not be accepted.
2. MyWritingLab.com

IMPORTANT DATES:
1. December 8, 2010 – End of Semester get together at Ms. Barnes’ House at 6:00 pm
2. December 9, 2010 - MyWritingLab must be completed by midnight

Week 13 - November 25, 2010

NO CLASS - THANKSGIVING

Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Week 12 - November 18, 2010

Individual Portfolio Preparation conferences

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Assignment for December 2, 2010

1. Individual Portfolio Preparation conferences – Bring one paper from Section A (Narrative, Description, or Process) and one paper from Section B (Compare and Contrast, Argumentive, or Cause and Effect) that you are considering including in your portfolio. This should be your best paper from each section.

2. Word maps

3. MyWritingLab.com

IMPORTANT DATES:

1. December 2, 2010 – 100 Word Maps due in class

2. December 8, 2010 – End of semester get together at Ms. Barnes’ House at 6:00 pm

3. December 9, 2010 – Final Portfolio Due in class

4. December 15, 2010 - MyWritingLab must be completed by midnight

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Week 11 November 11, 2010

Review 60 word maps
Peer Review of Paper 6
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Assignment for November 18, 2010
1. Reading
a. Expressways – Chapter 15 Cause and Effect

2. Paper 6-4 - Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Processor Barnes’ comments, peer review draft, and a final version of the essay.

3. Bring in a draft of your final portfolio cover letter.

4. Individual Portfolio Preparation conferences – Bring one paper from Section A (Narrative, Description, or Process) and one paper from Section B (Compare and Contrast, Argumentative, or Cause and Effect) that you are considering including in your portfolio. This should be your best paper from each section.

5. Word maps

6. MyWritingLab.com

IMPORTANT DATES:
1. December 2, 2010 – 100 Word Maps due in class
2. December 8, 2010 – End of Semester get together at Ms. Barnes’ House at 6:00 pm

3. December 9, 2010 – Final Portfolio Due in class


4. December 15, 2010 - MyWritingLab must be completed by midnight

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Works cited page information

General guidelines for works cited page
1. Single spaced
2. Should be a part of the essay not a separate document.  Once you finish typing your essay, insert a page break and then start the Works Cited page.
3. All entries should eb alphabetized by authors' last name.  If the work does not hav an author, alphabetize by the title of the work.
4. Each line afte the first should be indented.
5. NO internet sources are allowed.

Basic format for a book

Authors' last name, authors' first name. Title. City of publication: Publisher, year of publication.

Example: Tan, Amy. The Bonesetter's Daughter. New York: Putnam, 2001.

Basic format for an article in a magazine

Authors' last name, authors' first name. "Title of article." Title of magazine Date: page numbers.
Example of a monthly magazine (pay attention to how the date is presented):
Kaplan, Robert D. "History Moving North." Atlantic Monthly Feb. 1997: 21+.

Example of a weekly magazine (pay attention to how the date is presented):
Lord, Lewis. "There's Something about Mary Todd." US News World Report 19 Feb. 2001: 53.

Basic Format for an article in a daily newspaper

Authors' last name, authors' first name. "Title of article." Title of newspaper Date: page numbers.

Example: Murphy, Sean P. "Decisions on Status of Tribes Draw Fire." Boston Globe 27 Mar. 2001: A2.



Please prefer to the Modern Language Association (MLA) for further assistance.  http://www.mla.org/

Week 10 - November 4, 2010

Peer Review of Paper 5

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Assignment for November 9, 2010
1. Reading
a. Expressways – Chapter 16 Argument
b. Expressways – Chapter 17 Summarizing and Synthesizing Sources

2. Paper 5-4 - Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Processor Barnes’ comments, peer review draft, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 6-3 – Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, November 9, 2010.

4. Word maps - Bring to class 60 fully completed word maps. They must be neatly written to receive full credit.

5. MyWritingLab.com

Monday, October 25, 2010

Week 9 - October 28, 2010

Peer Review of Paper 4

Discuss Paper 6
Paper 6-1: Brainstorming
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Six: Cause and Effect

Cause and Effect is concerned with why things happen (cause) and the result of an action or event (effect). Please write an essay comparing and contrasting a social issue. (NO – dropping out of high school, abortion, teen pregnancy, violence on TV, Video games, etc).

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words and include at least one MLA in-text citation and a works cited page. Remember – NO internet sources are allowed.

Assignment for November 4, 2010

1. Reading
a. Expressways – Chapter 14 “Comparison and Contrast”

2. Paper 4-4 - Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Processor Barnes’ comments, peer review draft, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 5-3 – Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, November 2, 2010.

4. Paper 6-2 – Bring in an Idea map of the topic

5. Word maps

6. MyWritingLab.com

Monday, October 18, 2010

Week 8 - October 21, 2010

Discuss results of the Midterm Portfolio

In class assignment
Explanation of Paper 5
Paper 5-1: Brainstorming
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Five: Argumentative
An argument is line of reasoning intended to persuade the reader/listener to agree with a particular viewpoint or take a particular action. There are three essential parts to and argument – an issue, a position, and support. An issue is the problem or controversy that the argument addresses and also is the topic of an argument paragraph. A position is the particular point of view a writer has on an issue. Support consists of the details that demonstrate the position is correct and should be accepted. There are three types of support: reasons, evidence and emotional appeals. Please write an essay presenting and supporting an argument.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words and include at least one MLA in-text citation and a works cited page. Remember – NO internet sources are allowed.

Assignment for October 28, 2010

1. Reading
a. Expressways – Chapter 14 “Comparison and Contrast”

2. Paper 4-3 – Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, October 26, 2010.

3. Paper 5-2 – Bring in an Idea map of the topic

4. Word maps

5. MyWritingLab.com

Paper 4 Compare/Constrast - Brainstorm

foreign car/american car
army/navy
university/community college
laptop/computer
pepsi/coke
thanksgiving/christmas
tysons corner/mondowmin mall
chinese food/soul food
metropolitan/rural
burger king/MacDonald's
america/china
democrat /republician

Thursday, October 14, 2010

Week 7 - October 14, 2010

Collect 40 Word Maps

Collect Paper 3-4
Paper 1-4
MLA in-text citation
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Four: Comparison and Contrast
Comparison and contrast are two ways of organizing information about two or more different subjects. When focusing on similarities you are comparing. When focusing on differences you are contrasting. Write an essay comparing and/or contrasting two or more subjects. You can focus on both similarities and differences however this can be complicated.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words and include at least one MLA in-text citation and a works cited page. Remember – NO internet sources are allowed.

Assignment for October 21, 2010

1. Reading
a. Expressways Section VII F “Managing Mechanics and Spelling” pg. 565 – 572
b. Expressways Chapter 17 “Summarizing and Synthesizing Sources”
c. Expressways Business Letter formats pg 127 – 128 and 228 – 229

2. Paper 4 -2 – Research your topic and bring an Idea map/outline to class.

3. Word maps

4. MyWritingLab.com

Thursday, October 7, 2010

Week 6 - October 7, 2010

Mid-Term conferences

Peer Reviews of Paper 3
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Mid-Term Portfolio

Outside
Name
Date
English 101.1024
Ms. Barnes

Inside:
o Left Side
    Draft of Cover Letter
    Blue Book
    Draft of Paper 1 or 2
    Draft of Paper 3 – Process

o Right Side
    Final Version of the Cover Letter
     Final Version of Paper 1 or 2 (This the final draft of whichever paper you include as the draft.)

Assignment for October 14, 2010

1. Mid-Term Portfolio due – Portfolios must be in my mailbox, GJ 527, by 4 pm Monday, October 11, 2010. Late portfolios will not be accepted.

2. Reading
a. Expressways Section VII F “Managing Mechanics and Spelling” pg. 565 – 572
b. Expressways Chapter 17 “Summarizing and Synthesizing Sources”
c. Expressways Business Letter formats pg 127 – 128 and 228 – 229

3. Paper 3-4 – Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Processor Barnes’ comments, peer review draft, and a final version of the essay.

4. Word maps – Bring to class 40 fully completed word maps. They must be neatly written to receive full credit.

5. MyWritingLab.com - Exercises on Sentences, punctuation, and spelling

6. MyWritingLab.com

Thursday, September 30, 2010

Week 5 - September 30, 2010

Submit Final Draft of Paper 2


Discuss Mid-Term Portfolio

Writing a cover letter

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Mid-Term Portfolio

Outside:
Name
Date
English 101.102
Ms. Barnes

Left Side
Draft of Cover Letter
Blue Book
Draft of Paper 1 or 2
Draft of Paper 3 – Process

Right Side
Final Version of the Cover Letter
Final Version of Paper 1 or 2 (This the final draft of whichever paper you include as the draft.)

Assignment for October 7, 2010

1. Reading
a. Expressways: Chapter 10 “Process”
b. Expressways: Section VII D, “Writing Effective Sentences”, p. 537-553
c. Expressways: Section VII E, “Using Punctuation Correctly” p, 554 – 564

2. Paper 3-3 – Revise Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, October 5, 2010. Bring in one copy of the rough draft for peer review.

3. Portfolio cover letter – Email a draft of the cover letter to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, October 5, 2010.

4. Mid-Term Portfolio due – Portfolios must be in my mailbox, GJ 527, by 4 pm on Monday, October 11, 2010. Late portfolios will not be accepted.

5. Word maps

6. MyWritingLab.com

Sunday, September 26, 2010

Paper 3 Brainstorming

write a resume

buying a car
making a sandwich
buying a house
writing a paper
opening a bank account
taking out a loan
job search
file a tax return
register to vote
spring cleaning
changing a tire
landscaping
planning an event
making dinner
how to style your hair
making a necklace
getting ready for school
stopping smoking
mowing the lawn
play a video game
shoot a basketball
getting a drivers license
getting a name change

Paper 3 Process EXAMPLE

There is so much more to going grocery shopping then just going up and down the aisles looking for items that you may need. There is preparation. Preparation is an ongoing process and involves all members within the household.


One of the first steps in preparation is coupon clipping. Whether Fido brings in the paper or you must visit the newsstand, don’t forget to grab the coupons and advertisement pages from the Sunday newspaper. The coupons and advertisements give you a chance to see new products, decide on items that will be needed in coming weeks, and ultimately clipping coupons will save you money on the grocery bill.

The next step involves preparing a refrigerator list. The refrigerator list is composed of all the household items such as paper towels, soap, and cat food that are regularly used in your home. As household items are used, each person should remember to add the depleted item to the list on the refrigerator so that it can be included on the next grocery store run.

Depending on your families needs you may need to go grocery shopping weekly, bi-weekly or even monthly. Whatever your life dictates gather current grocery store advertisement and your coupons and work on your meal plan. From the meal plan, your grocery list is developed but then enhanced with the list of items on the refrigerator list.

Once the lists have been collated next comes sorting through all your coupons. Any item that you have on your list that can be purchased with a coupon should be marked with a “C” to remind you to purchase the correct brand.

Remember to never go grocery shopping hungry, you will feel the need to buy unnecessary items.

With list, coupons, and pen in hand you are ready to head to the grocery store. As you cruise up and down the grocery store aisles make sure to mark off each item on our list.

You must be a bargain shopper. Compare the prices of brands and sizes to get the best value for your buck. BEWARE! There will be many items marked for sale but keep walking if the item is not on your list.

After surveying all you see and making sure that all your grocery items have been retrieved, head to the checkout lanes. I hope that you have stuck to the plan and have saved a few dollars on your purchases.

In conclusion, even a chore like grocery shopping can be made easier by a little preparation.

Week 4 - September 23, 2010

Peer review of Paper 2

Discussion of Chapter 6 “Planning and Organizing Your Essay”
Paper 3  Brainstorming
Writing a cover letter
Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Three: Process Analysis

A process essay describes how something is done or how something works. Choose a topic that is familiar and write an essay identifying the process or procedure. Give an overview of the process, if needed. Details should be arranged in the order in which they occur. Give examples or make comparisons if needed.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words.

Assignment for September 30, 2010

1. Reading
a. Dancing with the Tiger (DWTT) p11 How to Write a Letter by G. Keillor
b. Expressways: Section VIIC “Avoiding Sentence Errors p 560

2. Paper 2-4 – Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Professor Barnes’ comments, peer review comments, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 3-2 – Research your process and bring a class a Idea Map of your technology

4. Word maps

5. MyWritingLab.com

Wednesday, September 15, 2010

Week 3 - September 16, 2010

Entry Diagnostic


Peer review of Paper 1

Discussion of Chapter 6 “Planning and Organizing Your Essay”

MLA Review

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Assignment for September 23, 2010

1. Reading

a. Expressways: Chapters 5 “Strategies for Revising”; Chapter 7, Drafting and Revising Essays, and Chapter 9 “Description”

2. Paper 1-4 – Revise your essay. Submit your rough draft with Professor Barnes’ comments, peer review comments, and a final version of the essay.

3. Paper 2-3 – Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, September 21, 2010. Bring in one copy of the rough draft for peer review.

4. Word maps

5. MyWritingLab.com

Monday, September 13, 2010

Paper 2 Brainstorm

birth control
cell phone
computer
marijuana
x
e pill
cd
8 track
tv
vinyl records
car
hair weave
pen
pencilpaper
video camera
microphone
laptop

Wednesday, September 8, 2010

Example of Paper 2 Description

Rubbers. Jimmies. Raincoats. Trojan. Lifestyle. Durex. The condom was known by many names. For the last three hundred years, the condom has helped prevent pregnancy and prevent the spread of sexually transmitted diseases, including AIDS. But now we must say goodbye – goodbye to this guardian of health and yes to an increase in unwanted pregnancies. Yes, to syphilis, chlamydia, herpes, and gonorrhea. Yes, to the steady climbing numbers of new AIDS case each year. But it is not like the condom didn’t try. The latex sheath worn on the penis during sexual intercourse acted as a barrier against the unknown – protecting all parties involved. Handled gently and not stored in back pockets, wallets, or anywhere that could possibly lead to damage, the condom was a shield. The condom was inexpensive and readily available. Because of its lightweight structure a man could enjoy sex longer, which also provided the couple with a safe, enjoyable, and undistracted sexual experience. Available in a variety colors, sizes, textures, lubricated and non-lubricated the condom begged for mass appeal. Attempting to diversify even more the condom offered a female version to help women take charge of their own sexual health.


Due to ignorance, embarrassment, lack of communication between parents and teens or just simple irresponsibility, the condom waited in vain for people to stop resisting it’s presence. But the resistance got stronger and the condom was left to die. The condom leaves children without families, a Nation plagued by STDs, and a world ravaged with AIDS.

Week 2 - September 9, 2010

Submit Paper 1-2

Register for MyWritingLab

Review of the Parts of Speech

Explanation of Paper Two

Paper 2-1: Brainstorming

Explanation of next week’s assignment

Paper Two: Description

Describe a piece of technology by writing its eulogy. Technology is any device used for any process. Your description should include a clear purpose and intended audience. The technology you describe may still exist but compose the essay as if it is not. This is a eulogy so be sure to explain what the piece of technology was in “life” and what legacy it left behind.

The essay must be use the MLA format and be at least 750 words.

Assignments for September 16, 2010

1. Reading:

a. Expressways: Chapters 3 “Writing Topic Sentences,” and 4 “Developing and Arranging Details,” Chapter 6 “Narration”

b. Part A Understanding the Parts of Speech pg 472-490

2. Paper 1-3 - Email your rough draft to Professor Barnes no later than 5 pm on Tuesday, September 14, 2010. Bring in one copy of the rough draft for peer review.

3. Paper 2-2 – Bring in an Idea map of the topic

4. Complete entry Diagnostic for MyWritingLab.com. Complete “Getting Started” modules (3).

5. Word maps

6. Bring a blue book to class